Meet Sergeant Major-san, an OC of mine in my One Piece fanfiction "Grand Line Kaigun'in." This is simply a preliminary sketch I did a while back trying to better picture him as I created his character. He's gruff and tends to be a bit calumniatory in his insults, but life made him that way. Or rather, he allowed himself to become that way. He's had an unhappy history; but despite what life has thrown him, he's stuck to his values--especially his concept of "Justice." He was based on Smoker a great deal, but don't worry; he won't be some crappy spinoff.

PRELIM STATS:
Name: Shirozaki Jinbu
Gender: Male
Age: 28? haven't decided yet
Blood Type: AB

I'll probably draw a better, more accurate portrait later in the month. Seriously, this drawing is crap.

So... What do you like about Sergeant Major-san? What should I keep, what should I throw out?